Critique Feedback

After critique I found there were some changes I could make to improve my image and help convey my story a little better. I was told to maybe add a store in my story so it is easier for the audience to understand that the figure in my story is a cheese seller/maker. To also create a further link between the cheese and the moon, It was suggested that I can maybe add a wrapper (possibly on the cheese) showing that it was the "best and only moon cheese" around. I also needed to add some imagery that can show the cheese maker/seller scamming people and becoming rich off their money. Overall the style of the story was fine but I had to make a better connection between with the images in my story.